I think it's really cool Tim. Very with the times for this style. You did well with it if you're not used to working/mixing this sort of thing. The only thing I'd maybe try to concentrate on....is sometimes the vocals sort of lose their impact with all the effects. Especially the one that goes a little AM radio sounding. The other thing is...though I'm fully aware of the stuff/effects that go on with this style and I like and accept the song just the way you delivered it, the voice sounds so computer sounding that it doesn't really have a distinct quality about it...if that makes sense?
Like usually, when guys sing this style, there are times when you can actually hear their voice a little behind all the effects. This one sort of sounds effected all through it to where any voice would suffice. Does that make sense at all? Like...there are no vocal characteristics that would make this artist stick out as unique other than I think the song/writing is great, or if you were marketing him to be some sort of "effect machine" where that would be his thing. You know...never really hearing the actual voice, the effects and production are the selling points along with good song writing and hooks. That's the best way I can explain it and I honestly don't mean any of that to sound harsh.
Absolutely love how it gets heavy and changes drums and has some rock lines in it! That was brilliant and something I always wished people doing this style would dive into more often. Something about those heavy drums coming in that just brings the piece to the next level. A little rock edge is killer for stuff like this. So I trhink you have something cool here. But you may want to try and decide if you want to have some sort of real vocal sound minus all the effects so he's a bit more distinct, or you go with the whole effect thing as "his thing". Either way it's cool in my opinion. Just some stuff to think about. Nice job bro!
-Danny