Hey Cian,
really nice work!  love the change up at 2:20!

the kick needs some beef, to my ears and less beater.

the flute is not bad at all for MIDI, not offensive at least!

really nice arrangement and performance!  mix sounds good!

Hi Cian.  This is really a nice arrangement.  Your vocals certainly come through with a lot of passion and although I don't understand the lyrics they come through with a lot of pride.
Nice one!

Hi Jim, I can hear you saying that jokingly with that Irish leprechaun impression American people do when they take us off , cousins are always at it "top of the mornin' to ya"! Thanks for commenting, I have amended the vocals at the start, they shouldnt be as severely panned now.

Foxwolfen, glad you liked it and more so for your crits. The left side issue should be tamed a little. In terms of the mix, I dont really know how to take it a step further, so Ill leave it as is for the time being.

Freddie & Starise, thanks a lot. And happy the vocals gave you that pride feel even though you don't know it, that comment means a lot in term of doing it justice.

Beagle, I'm glad you said it about the kick cos I too thought that it was a bit clickly especially when I listened to it on my iphone speaker. Ive tamed it down so it shouldnt be as present. You can let me know if it still doesn't cut the mustard. I know a few flute players, I might get them to do the start for me, make it the real deal.

Thanks

I don't know the original to compare this to, but what a great arrangement!  Love your vocals and the passion.  Well done! 

It's always interesting to hear someone sing in another language w/talent? Which is why I give the pleasure to my fellow commuters of swearing at them in loud full voice? With invective combinations they've probably never heard... (With hand gestures...) MARTHA FAULKER!!! (She was a good woman... and deserves to be remembered.)

I'm sorry for that right there Lord? And please be w/the pygmies in New Guinea...

Thanks a lot Janet!

Robby, w/talent? How dare you even put a question mark after that! Well that lady you refer to must get hell of a hard time cos her name sounds the very same as......oh.....well...yeah....... I see what you've done there :-)

Cian

Inspired and emotional! I'm amazed as usual by the sheer scope of your gifts my brother!!

Tony man, big thanks for your time. It aint gonna set the world on fire but hey it was a challenge and youve gotta do that much.

Cian