https://soundcloud.com/aj...asy-blood-deeper-black A original song from my band Deeper Black ..mixed,edited & played by me .check it and your feedback,comments are most welcomed ..waiting to hear from you guys soon :)

Hey man, nice work, can hear the emotion in your voice. One thing that I'm hearing is that the rhythm section is a little out of phase: the drums are hitting just slightly before the bass, which detracts from the "feel" of the beat. Maybe because of an effect that's putting the bass behind, or maybe you need to find a sweet spot right between the drums and the bass.

@jonboper thanks for the feedback .ya there is slight gap but thats because of limited availability of means .i dont have a bass guitar so the bass is given from electric guitar with a bass patch on the processor and vocals are given by my bandmate .thanks for the responce :)