Hello,
 
Having bought SHS6xl ages ago, and gotten away from it, I have finally got a song together. I hope you'll give it a listen and give me some feedback and pointers.
Thanks
Find the song here: (I hope)
http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=12023906

Man i really like it! Uplifting and amusing! It has a Weezer feeling to it which i like! :)

cool tune.... I actually like this.... it could almost be a good country song. 

Hey thanks for listening.
 
mrMRKelly- Thanks so much. Weezer feeling, that's kind of cool. I'm glad you liked it.
 
Guitarhacker- A good country song, I never thought of it like that but right now I'm listening to "Footsteps in the Hall" and I kind of get what you mean.
 
Thanks again
 

Listening on lappy spreakers, so can't really comment on mix, but I like the song a lot. I like the simplicity of it and the imaginative lyric. Maybe a couple of timing issues here and there, but I still enjoyed it.

Look forward to hearing some more from you.

I enjoyed this a lot.  Keep em coming.

great song Dodsie. More please

I'm like, hip to that daddy-o... real cool...  the lyrics are like a breath of air...  

paulo- thanks for the listen. Yes, the timing issues. I learned a lot on this first go, like once you create a drum track and then lay down some audio tracks it's a big problem if the timing is off. I think every time I hit the red button I got a bit excited and got ahead of myself.
lynn- thanks, I've got another on the go already. Glad you liked it.
daryl1968- thanks for tuning in. The first one took me 55 years so I'll try to bring in the second a bit quicker.
notnat- great response, very appropriate :) Thanks.
 
 

Now that was a GREAT first song.  Looking forward to hearing more.  KUDOS!

Kev