Daryl: Really nice song here. Well written, good, solid production. That major to minor change rules! Nice choice there!
One thing...nothing bad, just something I'm curious about as you may have done it by choice. When your crash cymbals hit, they seem like they swell in gradually. Did you want them to do that? If not, if you are running compression on the drums or a limiter or para-comp...it may be a bit too much. That's what usually causes that. If it was by choice, that's fine...just figured I'd throw that at you.
Everything is really great on this though. Nice voice...very soothing and your instruments choices were top notch! Loved the song and the arrangement. The back ups with the filtering/eq were a really nice touch too! Well done. :)
-Danny