It sounds great.
I'd dig in and get some more bass out of the guitar.
I'd move the shaker back just a tiny little bit... just turn it down a bit.
Maybe go for for less phase efx on your voice... and find a nice sweet reverb to glue everything together.
The song is so well done overall that if I was engineering for you I'd work to inspire you to try a few re takes on the very few phrases where you vocal tuning is stretched to the point where you sound uncomfortable. I'd just work on those as we ID'd them and it'd be worth it to see you smile. :-)
I don't know how it works for you... but the next song that auto plays for me on the Soundcloud site after your songs is "Big Scotia" by Hasse Krebs. If you have a chance to compare that back to back to your song you should immediately hear the way that cut has a deep authoritative bass tonal resonance coming off the guitar strings.
It's a "sonorance" type effect and it makes that cut sound "pro".
You can have that too!!!
Great stuff.
Just trying to offer some ideas of how another person might mix it.
all the best,
mike
PS wow I get to listen to Daryl's Simplicity in the stream... it's gonna be a great day.
:-)