"Broken Angel" (Power Ballad)
 
Hi, guys,
 
I just uploaded a test mix for a new song called "Broken Angel".  This one was really a bit different than usual for me because instead of writing it on guitar, like 99.9% of my stuff, I wrote this one on the piano.
 
If you have three minutes to check it out, as always, any and all helpful comments, suggestions, constructive criticism, input and ideas are welcome, and also greatly appreciated!

Thanks in advance for any observations, suggestions, comments and ideas!
Bob
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"Broken Angel"
 
128kbps MP3 on SoundClick at: http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=12037146

Or...

Better Quality MP3 on the Player at: http://www.boboister.com/test-mixes.html
 
Thanks!

Good rock ballad... well done ''test mix''  .. sounds nice

Using a different instrument to write, from what you normally use, sure has the ability to open new doors.

This sounds good Bob. Since it's a test mix I assume you have slightly more work to do. But it sounds good at this point too.

I really like this Bob - great, very hooky song. Definitely a 'single'
The only thing I would change is the kick seems a little busy - it would be more powerful with a straight 4 on the floor kick IMO.

Good work so far Bob... this will be another winner for you...

Nice keys! Always enjoyed your vocals. Nice melody line. As you probably know and likely going to do...a tighten up on the drum track in terms of timing and this is all set!

Hey Bob, great job as always.

Makke:
 
 
Hi, Makke,
 
Thank you very much, sir!  I greatly appreciate you listening and your kind comments!
 
Best wishes, my friend!
Bob
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Guitarhacker:
 
 
Hey, Herb,
 
Thanks for checking it out and commenting!
 
Yes, you're definitely right about songwriting on something other than your "main instrument" giving you a different perspective while writing.  It can be a refreshing way to stimulate new song ideas that wouldn't normally come up while noodling around on your usual instrument.
 
By the way, excellent job on your new post, "The Best Christmas", really good stuff, Herb!
 
Thanks again for the listen and kind words, have a good one, buddy!
Bob
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Wow top rocks Bob.
I agree the bass drum is a bit out of touch with the band.
Great guitars.
The vox seems to be flanged or chorused at times and it throws me off a bit thinking there is a pitch thing happening.
a very pro mix overall.
Thanks for sharing.

dude- this is great. ya know, the piano is reminding me of Motley Crue "Home Sweet Home" in its tone and rock ballad flavour. 
think this is a working-mix-in-progress so you'll probably play with the levels more- but there is not much to tweak- maybe the drums a bit- 

interesting and effective power ballad.  also dude you have one of the best voices i have heard in a long time.  there are instances where it sounds scarily like Ozzy, and that can only be a + in my book.  

well done.  impressed! 

-Daren