Hey everyone I don't know if this song sounds good. Like does it got a good tune? I only recorded a chorus and a verse and also chorus. I still have a second verse but im having trouble writing the second lyric with that. if anybody is willing to collab on this project please let know.You can have 1st verse of the song. thank you. http://soundcloud.com/tony_jay/un-solo-chance

Yes, Tony, this is good.  Please finish it.  There's no rush, just let the inspiration come.

 I agree with Lynn here. This is good just needs finished. Let us hear it when you get it completed.

I will guys it just hard

This is totally awesome stuff!  I'd say its finished song-wise ... but I don't understand the lyrics.  A quick outro and this is finished, IMHO.

There are pitch issues in a few vox sections (to my ears) which may need your counter vox to harmonize those sections.  (i.e., sing on top of your current vox with a counter melody that you've timed to match).  Else fix those pitch issues with a retake or melodyne.

Again, this is totally awesome stuff to my ears!

Philip is right. The vox issues are breathing related though, not pitch. You are tense and it shows. With this one its a matter of practice and a bit more vocal projection (sing with more passion, less fear ).