Well, I'm blessed with my lack of non-enjoyment of music because of technical ears that don't hear the things that the great technicians can hear.  So, for me it was very enjouable and beautiful.  It all sounded great to me.  The other guys always have the ears to help you.  Me, I'm just a listener and don't have mix suggestions unless it's so "lacking" that even I can hear it.  This is NOT in that category.  Did you write this song?

No one has mention the delay I think I can hear and there is a lot of options too to discuss. If I'm right start your search there for optional sound - in the big I thought it sound good anyway and a nice song to.

Thanks so much to everyone that has commented. I will take all suggestions on board and see if I can improve things. Thanks also for your kind comments on the song, really appreciated.
Cheers
Bibs

Have you tried playing with the VX 64 Vocal strip?
Nice romantic song.