Nicely done.

Just from a mastering standpoint, the first VO sounds louder than the rest.  I'd agree that there's probably too much reverb on it, too.  Other than that, the music works and it's well recorded.  Good job, Mooch.  

Ya, that makes more sense. However if you stuck in a situation like this again bring a couple (clean) socks with you to put over the mic. I'm too cheap to buy proper windsocks and popscreens so that's what I do to keep down sibilance and plosives. Try one sock at first and if it's not enough toss the other one on. I've also been trying to use two mics at once. One with a sock right up in my face and another one a few inches further away with no sock. That way if I get a really bad plosive I can edit it out and use the second mic track to cover make up for it. Yes... I'm weird... but I gitterdun. ;-)

 
This is actually a helpful post!
 
J

Well shoot.. I am not clever enough to comment and not knowledgeable enough in VO to make an intelligent comment... but I can see no reason for any of the rude comments in a post asking for input. I thought/think it sounds pretty good. The guy has a good voice, it could use a little more of that early FM radio deep vibe.
 
I'll go away now...
 
J

Yeah, I'm hoping that one freaky post was an inside joke of some sort. :-/

Only Mooch would bring commercials to the Songs Forum .

I'd not give up the day gig quite yet.

Beepster


Yeah, I'm hoping that one freaky post was an inside joke of some sort. :-/

No ... He's just a jerk ....Bapu and I haze each other in fun ...I think everyone here knows that .....

Sometimes I'll joke sarcastically with other people .... I suppose I've been a jerk a few times in my life although I don't like admitting it 





Don't sweat  it .... UnFortunately you can find jerks on any forum or really just about anyplace on earth 

Sounds cool, Paul.  Sounds like you've got plenty of help here.  :) 

Voice Over - With Original Music by Mooch ... not like Bapus all cover songs

But the "lyrics" were covers, roight?

Mooch4056

Bub

Well there's 147 seconds I won't get back.

You're mean and you hurt my feelings

You sound like my first 3 girlfriends, one bro-mance, my first wife, and my future x-wife current wife.