Terry,
 
Nice song.   If you are looking for suggestions, I would add a Soft Pad on the first verse.  This song has a nice retro 80's feel to it.  A few percussion fills here and there would add a nice touch.   Maybe a clave, some conga fills here and there.    Not personally a fan of the strings in this song except for the bit starting at 3:34 time frame.   I would use a Vintage Organ sound or a soft synth pad instead.  Maybe brighten up the hi-hats and cymbals a wee bit.  Quite enjoyable listen.
Regards

I love the tune.  For some reason I found myself wondering what this would sound like with half-time drums.  It wants to sound like a ballad but the drums are making it sound like it's had too much coffee or something.  :)  Maybe the 2nd time around it would work fine.  I'm certainly no expert on drums.  You might consider lowering the velocity on the piano track to give it a smoother feel too.

But overall, I really like this one!