Lyrics have always been my weak point. I'd go 20 years with one verse and nothing else. I will say that the more you do, the better you get and more free with your ideas. I don't use too many rules because I don't know them but it could why I'm here instead of in Hollywood or Nashville. :-) You've got a really good start here and a lot of good advice. Don't be afraid to pick someone and ask them to co-write with you. I just did that with Herb. It would have been another 20 year song but it isn't now! Good luck Janet, you're a great musician.