I've had a time with this one...
I would sure appreciate any constructive crits or suggestions...
 
New vocal tracks & mix...
 
"Friends To Lovers"
http://soundcloud.com/franktanton/friends-to-lovers

Frank,
 
As always, you deliver the goods. A very cool tune and the imagery is really a great compliment for this track.  
I am a Frank Frazetta fan and to see some of his work (or a sterling copy of his work) is wonderful.
 
Great choices all around. Super job.

Good job. 

I listened to the You tube version and then I listened to the sound click version. The sound click version sounded better to me. I know it is the same song. I think you tube looses something in the conversion process. At least this has been my experience with them.

Frank as always very good job. I like the way the guitar and the sax played off each other. I also like the guitar tone. 

Marcus Curtis


I listened to the You tube version and then I listened to the sound click version. The sound click version sounded better to me. I know it is the same song. I think you tube looses something in the conversion process. At least this has been my experience with them.

Frank as always very good job. I like the way the guitar and the sax played off each other. I also like the guitar tone. 

 
Thanks Marcus... but after listening with fresh ears, I had to delete both... I'm really having a hard time getting this one right... This is my latest attempt uploaded to Soundcloud...
"Friends To Lovers"
http://soundcloud.com/franktanton/friends-to-lovers

Hey Frank - I remember the original posting for this one - great song. Have you re-done the drums too?

Yes, I worked on the kick & snare quite a bit... I hope they sound better now... I can't tell any more...
Thanks for listening again...

notnat


Yes, I worked on the kick & snare quite a bit... I hope they sound better now... I can't tell any more...
Thanks for listening again...

It does sound great however, I reckon it would sound cool with the drums double time. Think 'Reelin in the years' Steely Dan

Honestly Frank, I think you've lost track of what the song wants to be.
Not sure what you are trying to achieve.
Does the tune really need/want all the autotune/melodyne?

Send me the 3 versions (I think there's 3, roight) and I'll tell you everything you don''t want to hear.

Lol... yes, I think I have lost track... I think it may just need another singer... or maybe just make it an instrumental... 
thanks Tim... I may take you up on your offer...