notnat


 I think it may just need another singer... or maybe just make it an instrumental...  

Or, turn it into a blues tune.

My experience is;

1. Friends
2. Lovers
3. I hate your ....ing guts get the .... out.

I like it, my "personal" recommendation would be that you make it a little more sparce like when you're taking the solos, but do that some more on the verse/chorus as well. Sonically, the organ and horns feel like they're fighting (even through they are panned, I hear that)

Or maybe less so in the beginning/middle and then build it in the end? But "everybody" is a producer I have learned...

I cannot possibly come up with a single crit or suggestion. This is an outstanding mix. Everything is balanced, good use of effects. Mind blown Frank.

Frank, give this one a little time.  Don't listen to it for a while before you get jaded.  I love the song and the mix, and others seem to like it, as well, so you're on to something.  With words this good, don't make it an instrumental.  Just my two cents, but I hope it helps give you perspective.

very nice work. Congratulations to ..I wish you continued success

yours affectionately