Hi folks, Another demo I'm working on, a song as narrative, steady groove throughout. Hope you dig. Listen for the police siren at the end, happy accident http://soundcloud.com/warrenlee-1/keyhole Best, Lee

This one's hard to judge, except for the siren.  That was a brilliant accident.  The rest of the song could use a tweak;  the rhythm guitar more or less drowned out the vocal which made the lyrics hard to understand.  The song had a Stones vibe to me, but I've come to enjoy your words, so I felt that I missed the message.  Still, this has so much potential and an easy fix.  I'd like to hear it again.

Hi Lynn, absolutely right.  I will be doubling up the vocal track on this, in addition to adding live drums, and possibly a bit of keyboard.  I do expect it to be good.  :)    As always, thanks so much for listening and taking the time to comment....so very much appreciated!   Lee

Very cool Lee. This has shades of Lou Reed which is great in my book

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Very cool Lee. This has shades of Lou Reed which is great in my book

Right on, thanks brother!

 Very cool vib to this tune. A really nice down to earth rock tune played well. I agree maybe a few tweaks to the mix and you're ready to go.

  Gracias! When it's all finished up I'll post, I hope and expect it to be good :) Lee