Interesting track, with some layered vocals. http://soundcloud.com/warrenlee-1/green-tongue-1 Best, Lee

Wow I Like a lot if you just could integrate the voice in a better way - as it is now its like two songs - not good.

Lee, you have found your niche and stayed true to it.  Believing in yourself is easier said than done.  This is unique in many ways, and will, no doubt, please many people who are tired of cookie cutter songs (like many of mine).  I, too, would have liked to have heard your vocal a little more, but that's because you write good lyrics.  If this is the way you want it, then I'm OK with that, too.

Lynn


Lee, you have found your niche and stayed true to it.  Believing in yourself is easier said than done.  This is unique in many ways, and will, no doubt, please many people who are tired of cookie cutter songs (like many of mine).  I, too, would have liked to have heard your vocal a little more, but that's because you write good lyrics.  If this is the way you want it, then I'm OK with that, too.

This is wonderful advice, thank you so much!  

Hey Warren, something a bit different than the accoustic stuff you have been putting up.  I don't know if you have EQ'd the vocal but try getting a little seperation between the two, this will help give it a little clarity.  Pick the main vox and boost the top end, and then with the 2nd vox reduce the top end.  Also find the formant of the vocal, around the mids and do the same, that is boost one and reduce the other.

Peace Ben

  Thanks Brother...I'll work on it... Lee