Your playing and singing is great (as always) but there is some punch missing to both the mix and the chorus. Mebee you wanted a more laid back version? I'm confused by the drums then. They seem like they want to move the song during the chorus but the guitars are kinda laid back.

Other than that observation you did a great job.

Nice one Robbaay. Never was much into 3Dnight (at all).  This was great though. awesome vocs dude....

i wanna hear you sing Jeremiah Was a Bullfrog. :) 

I can't listen to your song right now , I'll check it out later !

Other than those atrociously loud and entirely-too-long crashes, you have quite the cover here, sir. Voice sounds real strong and beautiful. 

Yeah, I doubt it, but that's OK. I used to get lathered? Now I only do it when I shave, which isn't that often?

I do shave my face regularly however, WAIT!? Are we talking about the same thing?


(I'm sorry for that right there Lord...) "No one" will ever master the double entendre as do I... No one.

Ok, edit the crashes, check. It will be in remix4. Thanks Jim. 

I've never really done that? But I guess I can see your point.

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Edit, oh yeah, I just listened and focused on it, and not all, but some are way too loud, maybe I can look at shortening some as well. Thanks again.
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2nd edit - "Voice sounds real strong and beautiful."

Throws head in slow motion, lowering it, and swinging it from left to right, allowing mane to flow in billowy folds like a Breck girl commercial.  I need to start including videos in these posts? 
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3rd edit, "maybe not..." unfortunately, the only billowy mane is from my ears and nose :-(

I'm sorry for that right there Lord...

These crashes sound like the mike was RIGHT HERE when in a real world situation the tail on the crash would soon be overpowered by the rest of the kit.  Use a sample that is not a ride crash, something like a 14" or so.

Check, so I'll have to dip in to my early days "as an actor?" 

I'm sorry for that right there Lord... But he threw me a softball?

UPS, I have a package for a Ms. Right?

Again, I'm sorry for that right there.

notnat


Very good Robby... only 2 3 suggestions, after the one two listens...

The falsetto 3'rd on on the "How does yer light shine", is too weak and wimpy, go ahead and belt it out... even strained it will sound better... the rest of the harmony is great...

Crank up the drums! mo' pfhat...
 
Fatten' up the elec. lead guitar...

Frank, thanks again for your insight, I followed your instructions to the best of my ability.