Nice song and nicely performed. It has great energy and it really rocks! The mix needs some work as per comments above.

itsadequate
My specific queries would be - 
do the drums sound OK?
is the bass at an appropriate level?
is it too muddy? 

1. No. They are lost. IMO
2. No.
3. Yes.


This is a guitar song but honestly all I hear is guitar. Ohhhhh, I see from your avatar you are a guitar player. That 'splains it. 

Sorry it was taking you to a FB page. When I click it it takes me to a RN page that has the relevant song first. Sorry for any inconvenience.

I get redirected too, But I managed to zap it buy activating No Script. 
But I'm not sure which song to listen to, Is it the second song While I still can or the first Invisible?. 

Sorry about the redirect. I had no idea. For some reason I'd stopped geting notifications about replies to my original post, and it was only today that I saw that there had been problems opening up the song, so I replied with my apologies. Frail Hurricane has now been released (with the comments from the forum helping greatly in the revised version). Currently While I Still can and Invisible are unfinished demos.

I listened to the Frail Hurricane.. nice rock song.. hmmm... bass and drums are a little quiet in my opinion