• Songs
  • Velour Crucible...Jazz Fusion
2012/10/30 17:45:34
Starise
 
  Recent music I'm working on. Crits welcome.Hope you enjoy it.
 
http://soundcloud.com/starise/velour-crucible 
 
 Recent remix.
2012/10/30 18:40:42
ohgrant
I really dig the basic track and the soloing instruments are really cool too.  Interesting fun jam session
2012/10/30 19:27:27
The Band19
There seems to be too much echo on the guitar for the riffs to really cut through. And while many things took turns jamming, it seems like there needs to be something solid holding this together from a melody perspective. The keys feel like they were played at a different time than the guitars, like here's a BPM and a key, "go!" I would say pick either the guitar or keys and make a melody, and then build things around that. But I like structure :-)
2012/10/30 19:30:25
guitartrek
Very cool.  I think you have nice mix going.  I think the horns sound very realistic.  The only thing for me was that listening though headphones - the piano panning from left to right not good.  I'm sure it sounds fine on speakers.   
2012/10/30 19:37:42
notnat
I love to noodle around with this kind of groove... the EP sounds fine to me... Good one... 
2012/10/30 21:07:24
Marcus Curtis
The mix is good I like the bass Sounds like you had fun with this.
2012/10/30 21:25:07
MetalTeK
Pretty cool song.

Yea, really like the mix too.  Everything sounds really separated.  Love the Hi-hat.
2012/10/30 21:39:42
CLEAN
Fun to listen to - sounds like it was a lot of fun to do.
2012/10/30 21:40:30
Old55
Cool tune.  I like the tempo and the performance.  The mix is good, too.  
2012/10/31 11:39:46
Lynn
You had me looking for someone to dance with.  This is a lively tune that was fun to listen to.  I like the mix as is; everything was in its own place, and it all blended together with a touch of spice.  Great job.
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