http://soundcloud.com/illogistical/caveat-emptor

Eerie and haunting.  I like this arrangement and mix.  It has depth and very good dynamics.  The lyrics, however, tell the story.  Whoever wrote these words deserves an A+.

Thanks Lynn. I can always count on you for unbiased feedback. I wrote the lyrics too.

This is a very otherworldy tune, I like it.  I hear Tool meets Black Sabbath.  Very cool treatment of the vocals.  The bass is smoking.  Nice work! 

I'm not sure if this will make the pop charts but it is very well designed and implemented.  Great mix - even tho it is thick (love the bass, too) everything stands out clearly.  I do wish the "shark cartillage" bit was a little louder.  As others have said, the vocal treatment is a treat.

Hey, let's hear it for science rock.  Make the kids pay attention in school. ;-)

Not even coming close to the pop charts is what I was hoping for. Thanks guys for the great feedback!