I like the song writing I enjoyed some of the phrases very much.
the singing is good. You've spent some time on your voice, that's nice. (you dont take a lot of chances)
The arrangement is well put together.
If you are a songwriter producing his ideas to get them into the real word? Nailed It!
My best advice...write another one. Always be writing "ABW"
and dream big
Is that your setup in the picture? Nice!