Cool tune....I played it while I did something else and I noticed that I really like that groove. 

Nice job. 

Shows really nice diversity, and as you know, I am all about that too :D. There are some distractions with the panning at the moment. Those were already covered. I love it's movement and overall composition though. Thanks for sharing Lynn :).

Tony

I loved this tune...kinda Joe Walsh-ish....(which is good in my eyes)...I know some might not like the vox efx...but i love it.. very very cool tune!

Herb, thanks for stopping by.  It's funny, but I wrote this song while working on something else.  I got distracted and ended up with this.

Tony, I appreciate you comments and your time.  Hopefully, the panning issues have been resolved.

Tom, I love Joe Walsh, so thank you for the compliments.  As for the  f/x, many people claim to love the old Roland Space Echo, and this is the closest I've come to emulating that tape delay.  It's a little dark, but those who had a tape delay know this is reasonably accurate.  It just happened that I liked this color for the vocal.

Thanks again to all of you.  This is still a WIP, but it is getting closer and closer each day to a finished product thanks to all of you.

Hey Lynn I like the remix on this , sounds great !

James

Thank you very much, James.  I've been enjoying your new song, too.

only some of the sounds need to be improved
but the concept is good and of course your voice too  ;-)
i think, a bit more polishing of the sounds
would be good (Shine)
It could be a real hit.


All the Best

B36B, thank you for having a listen.  I think you may be right.  A little spit shine could do wonders.  This song is still open and a long ways from being polished, but I do appreciate your ears and advice.

Missed the earlier mixes so can't comment in relation to them. I like the guitar sound - feels spot on for this.

 A really cool tune, no crits on the new mix.