Wow, Jan!  Really nice!  It's really interesting in that it is so very much of it's time and of now, as well. The mix is just very clear and nice--I'm on earbuds and my iPhone, but the earbuds are my good ones. ;) the only crit I have is some of the plosives on the vocal.  I am sure someone here could tell you just how to do it, but I can't... Notch out something on some freq or other.  I'm so pathetic.  But, really well done, Jan. All around.

julibee


Wow, Jan!  Really nice!  It's really interesting in that it is so very much of it's time and of now, as well. The mix is just very clear and nice--I'm on earbuds and my iPhone, but the earbuds are my good ones. ;) the only crit I have is some of the plosives on the vocal.  I am sure someone here could tell you just how to do it, but I can't... Notch out something on some freq or other.  I'm so pathetic.  But, really well done, Jan. All around.

Thanks, Jules.  I'll give that some thought.  

Well that's a pleasant way to greet Sunday morning!

Nice song Jan, more please

Real nice song.

I liked the choices for the synth pads... they supported the nice, clean guitar playing.





I think, somehow, the addition of the synths may have incited and instinct, on my part, to somehow emphasize a lower frequency tonality on the vocals.



Thanks for sharing!


best regards,
mike

Thanks, Colin and Mike.  I have a few more from those recordings to share.  

Enjoyed listening to this Jan thanks for sharing

jan.. .  I hope you don't wait 34 more years to post another song!!  This is really cool.  Sort of started out like America.  My only suggestion would maybe have a smidge of delay/reverb on her crystal voice.
More!

I like it...simple and to the point.  

I didn't listen close to hear the plosives JB mentioned..... but.... if you have this in multi track it's easier to fix.... but I have used gain reduction and enveloping to lessen the plosives... those "P's" are really bad..... but they are not that hard to fix with a bit of care. That method might work too on a mixed track but I'm guessing the envelopes or gain reduction would need to be lessened to prevent a noticeable gap.


This song .....I like. 

hi jan this is a cool tune it has a hooking effect very creative, great job thanks eric

Very nice Jan...

One critique...the vocal kinda gets lost in spots....usually at the beginning of each
verse...but great overall!!