Hey I'm back with all new changes to my song called " TEARS FOR YOU " . I completely replayed all the piano tracks recorded for this song playing them slightly different and correcting some noticable flaws in my playing of those piano sections .
 
http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=11961982&q=hi&newref=1
 
As for the mix I also completely remixed everything , I'm 100% happy with this remix now and have no plans to make any addition changes with the mix I have now .
I have checked it and rechecked it and balance out my pad tracks to bend in nicely with my piano recorded tracks .
 
This is my final version and post for this song , hope some of you enjoy the music and the piano tracks I replayed in this piece of music I created .
 
Enjoy and thanks for listening again - James
 
 

Simplistic, mood music. It works well, James!

Scottytunes


Simplistic, mood music. It works well, James!
 
Thanks Scotty that was my goal to make it simple and sound good , sometimes too much is a bad thing .
 
James
 

This sounds 100 percent better then the last mix. I can hear everything evenly. The drums are clearer and I can hear what the piano is doing. Great Job Night Fox

Marcus Curtis


This sounds 100 percent better then the last mix. I can hear everything evenly. The drums are clearer and I can hear what the piano is doing. Great Job Night Fox

          Thanks Marcus for taking time to listen and comment on this final version , I'm glad
          I decided to take the time to replay everything over again and remix it again it
          was worth the extra effort .
 
          Thanks -James

syndrella


I think life is nothing without songs.I love songs.

         Point well made , life is nothing without the sound of music in our lives . Thanks
         for dropping in , glad you enjoyed the music .
 
         James

Very nice song and recording James!  Big improvement.  I'm going to go out on a limb and say I'd like the piano to be about a dB louder in the mix.  I like my "leaders" to lead and be up front in a mix, whether it's a vocal, a piano, or a digeridoo...LOL

Other than that tiny crit... 2 thumbs up!!!

syndrell is a spammer.... 

I do like this song version better, much better.... nothing sticks out at me as being off kilter with this.... it was worth the time to redo the tracks. 

I would pull that opening synth string pad  down several db but that is the only nit I have with this version, more to the level of the pad after the cymbal crash....  I like to build a song more as it goes along....to gently but constantly increase the energy level.....start out simple and build it. Use tension and release through out to achieve that emotional connection to the listener. 

Well done, much better!

James, you hit the nail on the head with this mix.  It sounds clear and lush in my room.  I love the melody and the chord change near the end of the song.  This is very sophisticated arranging.  Well done, my friend.

tbosco


Very nice song and recording James!  Big improvement.  I'm going to go out on a limb and say I'd like the piano to be about a dB louder in the mix. 
 
Thanks for the comments , to be honest with you I worked with the mix as you suggested and for some reason the piano synth I'm using doesn't sound as good when I back off with my back up pad synth track . I went round and round trying different volume levels in each track and honestly this mix is as good as I can get it so it all my tracks sound balance .
 
Thanks , I'm going to work on writing some lyrics for this music and then vocals and see where I stand after doing that . maybe then the piano track might have to be raised in the mix .
 
Cheers -James

Guitarhacker




I do like this song version better, much better.... nothing sticks out at me as being off kilter with this.... it was worth the time to redo the tracks. 

Well done, much better!
 
Thanks Herb , right now I'm going to stick with this mix and work on writing some lyrics and then vocals and see where I'm at after I add all that in my mix .
Right now I think I have a pretty good mix as good as I can get it to sound , I have tried what you suggested and keep going back to the level I have now with my pad track that supports my piano track .
 
Thanks again Herb - James

Lynn


James, you hit the nail on the head with this mix.  It sounds clear and lush in my room.  I love the melody and the chord change near the end of the song.  This is very sophisticated arranging.  Well done, my friend.
 
Thanks Lynn for all the listen in the past weeks and your comments on this new updated version , time to work on writing some lyrics and see I can take this a step higher with lyrics and vocals .
 
Thanks buddy - James