i am looking for some feedback
i know it is raw not really defined
i just want to know if it's a good Idea? 
and of course i hope you will enjoy this lill loop.

http://soundcloud.com/boomin36beatz/last-summer2


Thanx

Hey, I like it!  And to be unmastered, it is really loud!  It has kind of a happy flavor to it.

My little criticism is that there is just too much reverb on the whole thing.  I think it sounds good on what I think is the electric piano in this tune.  But I would have thought the kick would have been way more dry, and a shorter, less dense on on the synth strings.  If the vocals are supposed to be understood, then they are buried in the mix... BUT if they are just an effect, then I think they're OK.

I think with a little less reverb, the parts stand out and grab your ear...makes ya wanna say "Cool.. I can hear that... what's next?"

Thanks for posting.  Let us know what you plan to do with this.  :-)

Thanx Tony for your feedback.
overall there are too much reverb in it espacially on the drums, that's right.
i will do the changes soon.
thanx that you Liked the Piano tune. :-)
and the vocals are in it as an effect.
No Great Plans at the moment but wait a min...
finish it first of course 


once again thanx for passing by and leaving this constructive feedback.



 

The concept is perfectly fine.  I like the melody and the soundscape you've created.  The f/x on the bass drum and snare are cool, too, though I agree with Tony about the wetness level.  Once you find the right mix this loop will take on a life of its own.  I hope I get to hear it.

@Lynn thanx for your constructive critics and sorry for my late reply
i did read what you wrote 
and tried to improvise some tunes and tried to get rid off the extrem reverb (Wetness Level)  
i know it is still raw but i think i am getting closer.
here is an updated version

http://soundcloud.com/boomin36beatz/last-summer2

i hope you will enjoy it.
and thank you very much
for taking the time to listen to my music and leaving such a nice Feedback 


Peace!!!