James: After noting that you made changes, I had to revisit..... another long and enjoyable listen was in order. WOW! All that you did gave it such a more... mellow and smooth flow at parts, I was so impressed. Nope, I did not miss the gong, even though I got it the first time around.... You replaced that moment, that critical crescendo, with some kind of a cymbal. It worked even better. Wow! What a colorful difference, a few subtle changes make in this piece! I LOVE it, absolutely! I want to hear much, much more of this from you! Keep doing it !! -John

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James: After noting that you made changes, I had to revisit..... another long and enjoyable listen was in order. WOW! All that you did gave it such a more... mellow and smooth flow at parts, I was so impressed. Nope, I did not miss the gong, even though I got it the first time around.... You replaced that moment, that critical crescendo, with some kind of a cymbal. It worked even better. Wow! What a colorful difference, a few subtle changes make in this piece! I LOVE it, absolutely! I want to hear much, much more of this from you! Keep doing it !! -John

 
         Hi John , thanks so much for the comments on this new remixed posted version .
         I took everyones suggestions and tried to make those changes in a positive way
         so again thanks to everyone who gave me suggestions to try out in order to
         make the song sound better then it was earlier when I posted it .
         I think I might have to look to see if I can't buy some type of piano software that has
         great sounding piano sounds in it that I can use with my DAW and with my keyboard .
 
         Hey thanks for the second listen and comments on this new remix , have a great
         day or evening !
 
         James
 
 

Gee I hate to keep messing with this but after listening to it I noticed a few areas in my piano track that needed correcting .
I replayed the chorus section again to corrected a few off notes and then remixed it one more time .
I also notice in my bridge section I by mistake left a fill in that was in the wrong spot so I deleted that fill .

Thats it for the music , I'll start messing around with some lyric writing for this song and then vocals .
No rush , maybe by next month sometime I'll have a brand new version with lyrics and vocals .

Thanks everyone who commented on my song and for your support , hope everyone is having a nice day today .

James

Well I decided to remove the song off here and off soundclick , why because I have started replaying & recording all the Piano sections over again slightly different this time .

Anyway thats my update on this song , see yea !