You have some interesting music. You have some very unique composing skills and for the most part I like your ideas. You did a good job with the separation of all the guitar parts. Also I am able to make out cymbals through the distorted guitar sections. I will say good job with that.
Over all though I detect a lack of low end in the mix. This makes the bass drums and the toms harder to hear. I can hear the snare fine. but for me when everything is going the bass drum gets lost. Great job on the guitar tones. The guitars are the stars of your music. I can tell you invested a lot of time into getting them right.
I did not hear bass guitar at all. Is there one? if not then this makes the bass drum even more important. I should note that I had my bass reflex cranked up and it was still hard to make out.
out of all your tunes I think I like How it goes the best. Shows a different side to your abilities.