@ daryl1968, no I just dreamed all of this.

illerill, Ill be honest I dont think this is bad at all. This genre has those type of words in it, I think the verse lyrics fit really well actually. The chorus is fine  but "your a crazy ****" is a little elementary when it comes to lyrics. But for this type of music the groove of the lyrics with the beat is most important and I think youve nailed that.

I get a wiz khalifa vibe off it.

I'd be proud of it and I think its worth mastering as is. 

But to take your art to the next step, you need to focus and a little more on alternative lyrics and maybe bigger vocal hooks for the chorus.

Good work,

Cian

Thanks alot for the feedback cian. I'm really taking all feedback I get into consideration. I already have some tracks recorded where I believe I've stepped it up, and some that might be like this one. Oh, well we'll see what people think of those when they're done! Anyways, I'm working on an album too and as I said I'm really taking your words into consideration to step it up! When it comes to the language it's just who I am. Since I was 8 or so I've been having such a foul vocab. So it's not like I'm adding it because of the genre. It's just me being me.