Seem to have missed this one somehow. Has a Peter Gabriel vibe early on which I like. Effortless sounding vox as usual .The ending threw me a bit. Might take a few more listens for that to grow on me.

Janet, thanks for having a listen and your kind comments.  I'm especially pleased you liked the percussion because those parts took longer than all of the others combined, and I programmed them myself.  BTW, I love the new mix you put up for your new song.

Paulo, I'm glad you found this and took the time to comment.  As for the ending, it's growing on me, too, although it could change in a heartbeat if I think of something better.  I can tell you that I've already thought of several endings not nearly as good.  There will be a new mix of this very soon to address the volume of the lead vocal that has been mentioned several times.  So beware.

I thought the random riff ending (that totally didn't fit anything else in the song) was an interesting twist. Perhaps it was a chance for the cat using the ARP Odyssey 3 as a litter box to show his stuff. There were a lot of timing and synchronization issues throughout the song. The vocals weren't that spectacular with having limited vocal range. Other than that, there wasn't anything else really bad about the song. It did tell a story, which was good. Overall though it was pretty boring.

Hi Pete, I thought you had disappeared.  Welcome back, amigo.  Hopefully, you'll get a new set of ear buds for Christmas (or ears). 

Wow Lynn, this was such a great song. I love the tone of your vocals. The music that carries this is brilliant also.

Superb work.

Mark.

Mark, thanks for having a listen and taking the time to reply.  It's nice to know that my music reaches the home of where it all began for me.

hi lynn love your mixes this is a great peace thanks for sharing it,s keeper eric

Eric, thanks for the kind words and the listen.  Peace be with you.

  Very nice mix processing on both the vocals and the guitars. Everything from the sparse bass line to the vocal harmonies to the moving backing strings add to the unique character this song endows.

Jayhill, thank you for the kind words and for stopping by.  BTW, I'll soon have a new mix of this up which I did in X2 with some of its new goodies.