The remix sounds great! I think I can even hear the tabla now. Is there some auto panning going on here? "motion?"

Thanks for having a second listen, Robbie.  There's no auto panning going on,  I just split the percussion into separate channels.  I appreciate your comments very much.

good job.. version 2.0 sounds better and clearer .. beautiful song

Nice one Lynn. I immediately thought it reminded me of Peter Gabriel too. Great Vocal though and great all round

Makke, thanks for your time and comments.  You and others have been very generous.

Stuart, I've been very impressed with your latest offerings.  Thank you for listening to mine and commenting.  It sure helps to have extra ears that listen on a variety of monitors, especially when I've lost some perspective after repeated listens to the same song.

Nice Job!!!
Made me think of Steve Winwood at first

Mike, thank you very much.  It's quite a compliment being compared to Stevie Winwood.  Congrats on your latest.

Very cool!!!  Is that a chorus on your vocal?  (I haven't read all the previous posts.) I really like the percussion, and I agree with the previous post comparing your voice to Peter Gabriel.  Very CD-Quality production IMO.

If I had to make any crit, it would be that I would like to hear a little more "air" on your vocal... slightly more intelligible (maybe it's my speakers???.... lol)  That would really "float" your vocal on top, cuz this tune is kinda dreamy.  (I actually like to hear the spit in the back of your throat.)  And, add a longer reverb to those strings at the end so they match your mix space and production.

Since I'm new to this forum, I look forward to hearing more tunes!!!  Keep up the good work!

Tony, thanks for having a listen and your  comments.  You have brought up an interesting observation about the vocal, and I'm keen to give it a try.  You are correct about the chorus, which is a stock plug in from CW.  I also added Breverb just to give it a try, and I must admit, it may replace several reverbs that I've used in the past.  I may apply it to the strings at the end of the song to bring all the elements together.  These are all good observations, and just what I look for from my forum friends.  This now makes you a coproducer on this project.  Welcome to the forum!

Man, I just listened to this tune again, and I really dig it!  Would love to know some details about instrumentation, guitar/amp setup, etc.