As a side note, my son who's 9? Listened tonight (it's a Daddy Weekend) and I was watching the windoze media visualizer as the song played, we both had phones on.

When it finished, I looked over and he was sitting there crying his eyes out! I pulled the phones of and said what is it son? Are you OK? And he looked at me, red face, big tears coming down and said "it's just so sad!" 

This is a really nice song.  Not much to crit.  Nice lyrics and a very nice performance.  The violins seemed a little strong to me, but a very nice tune.  Well done guys, nice guitar work too.  More dobro would be good.

DAryl

An amazing coincidence? And I do mean "amazing!?" I gave a bum a dollar at a light this evening? And he said EXACTLY the same thing! More dobro! Well? It could have been "More dough bro!" Still? Weird...

beautiful song... enjoyable to listen to.. sounds good

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An amazing coincidence? And I do mean "amazing!?" I gave a bum a dollar at a light this evening? And he said EXACTLY the same thing! More dobro! Well? It could have been "More dough bro!" Still? Weird...

That was me... and yeah, I meant more Dobro... cheap-skate...
 

He had a "you know who" (hope and change) 2012 bumper sticker on his shopping cart/buggy with his belongings in it. He was definitely part of the 99%? Because he was giving off more scents than you could imagine? Perhaps even more than 99? I'm actually going to work on some more of that funny lap slide guitar for Mister Markno. But with the boy this weekend, it may not be until next week. We'll see, maybe I can sit him at some muted games for an hour or so.

Great stuff Robby and Mark! 

First off this is one great tune you wrote, Robby, and the performances are outstanding.  I won't make 'mix' comments 'cause you already heard from one of the best set of ears out there in the person of Mr Yoyo. 

Funny that James mentioned Tiny Dancer, because I was hearing a bit of Dobbie Gray's "Give me the beat boys and free my soul..." (sorry, blanking on the title) in more or less the same spot.

No matter, it's a great tune, well performed, and... yeah, I could hear this as a hit in the modern country ballad genre with a name artist.  So, tweak 'er up and get legging that puppy around.

Best thing I've heard from you Robby, and that's saying something..wonderful lyrics, sublime melody, perfect instrumentation, beautiful delivery. Top stuff man.

Real nice Robbay and Mark.

"Give me the beat boys and free my soul..."
I heard that too.