Hi congalocke. Good job on the mix. Are you using any sort of Mastering software or is this just the mixddown tracks? If you aren't using a Mastering suite, I can recommend iZotope Ozone5. It will boost your volume, put some sparkle in the mix, and give it a polished sound. I use it on all my mixes now and am very happy with it.
Jamie has a great voice! Make her a little more intelligible for us!!
The whole world is a critic, huh? LOL
Good job, keep up the good work.