Hi Eric, this song has a lot of potential in general. your lead guitar playing is nice , very melodic and tasty. if that is what you are looking to showcase in this tune, I'm thinking out loud , so forgive me...i think the intro spills the beans too early and leaves your lead guitar out hanging to long w no place left to go . my suggestion would be to give the songs intro a little breathing room , maybe set it up a little with the nylon string in a sparser background that builds thematically and introduces the various layers over a short period of time as the song builds . Kenny