notnat


Good work on the vocal James... I think you did well with the lyrics too... I believe the production might be more effective if you muted the lead line during the vocal sections...  well done...
 
Hey thats an ideal I might mess around maybe with tonight , I'll stick with this for now .
Thanks for the heads up on the lyrics and vocals too , I think everyone around here might hear more of my future song projects with music, lyrics and vocals .
I like electronica type music but someone told me too many people are doing it now and its starting to wear thin with everyone . Music with lyrics and vocals is the way to go I think , people never get tired of those types of songs .
 
Thanks -James

evadianepug


Lyrics are easier to understand.  Nice job.  The subject matter might be too close to home on certain levels for me.  They are true but sad to me.  Think you got it, though.  Way to stick to it.  Oh, the vocal is well done, James.
 
Thanks again Warren , maybe with some more vocal practice , brush up on my song writiing skills and keeping working on my musical skills maybe down the road I can make some pocket change for myself and the exwife who by the way is still stuck on me like glue .
Thats what happens after twenty three years , the glue turns into super glue ! LOL
 
Thanks for the listen and comments Warren -James

Bob Oister


Hey, James,
 
Great work on this very cool song with a strong message!
 
Really nice synth work and sound textures, solid drums and percussion, and you did a fantastic job on the vocals on this!
 
I think this is my new favorite from you, James.  Have a great weekend, buddy!
Bob
 
Hi Bob , thanks for the comments on music , lyrics and vocals . Everyday on our local news it crime , sex crimes and it never seems to stop so I thought why not write about it . I figured I might as well be the first to get this kind of message out here and on SoundClick , who knows maybe I'll save a life or two with this song .
 
Thanks again Bob for checking me out and your comments on my new song , have a good one too -James

SteveStrummerUK


Hi James

A powerful message indeed, and the music fits the mood very well.

Steve

THE NIGHT FOX

SteveStrummerUK


Hi James

A powerful message indeed, and the music fits the mood very well.

Steve

         Thanks Steve ! Hope you plan on sticking around , I haven't seen you around in
         awhile .
 
         Thanks - James

Makzimia


James,

Much better.

Tony