Hi Tony, each time I hear you, you are getting more adventurous. This piece has a lot going for it, but as Vicente said, it's lacking in bass. The bass drum is very present, but that's all. If you intend for this tune to have no other bass instrument, then never mind, it's OK as is. It's kind of an eclectic song, but it gets one's attention. The only other thing that drew my attention was the vocal. It 's a fine vocal, but the lyrics sound rushed which gives it a herky jerky feel. I do like the fact that you didn't process your voice, and we can hear the real you. Overall, this is a good effort, and it's just a hair away from being a real gem.