You lifted and broke my heart at the same time. First, I like your song. The video of the little girl reminded me so much of times with my daughter. She is in rehab for the 4th time. I told them if they didn't keep her longer that a month I'd have her committed. She needs long term help and they have agreed. I know because I went through the same thing 24 years ago (still clean). Long term is necessary sometimes. SORRY, BUT it just plucked a string in my heart. The song is wonderful. I think there is some room in the mix for improvement but I don't know where because I was stuck on the content. I'll try to listen again but I don't think anything really needs to be changed. Keep an eye on that little girl, the grow up so quickly.