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So...I wrote a new one "Parasite," and fixed "Denial" as well. The guitars were sadly out of tune. at least one of the strings...all better..
any opinion on clarity/mud is welcome...all in all both songs make 5 minutes.. if you get a moment, I'd like to know how I'm doing..

Sorry, the link is not working for me.

I clicked on it just now. took me right to it. hmmmm

any thoughts on this?

I think the song is good.  The last couple rock/metal tunes I've listened to up here are really good but lacking in the bass department.  My monitors produce accurate bass and it could just be me.  I just blew my nose and the bass got louder.  LOL!  I love the bass tone but maybe it could be a bit louder.  I just cranked it up even louder and the bass was more prevalent than at lower volumes.  Hey, is this music supposed to be loud?  Just kidding.  It's strong.  Sounds better the more I listen.   OH, I think the guitars sound great!