You Scandanavians are pumpin' the songs up her. I just listened to Panup's cut and now yours. Great stuff. Ok, your rap is very well done. I don't believe you have to use f*** at all, but that's your business. Your vocal kinda lets it down a bit. I don't know what it is because as I said you rap really good! Maybe it's the mix on that part, it sticks out like a sore thumb, no insult intended. A bit pitchy too on the singing part. Love the way you rap so keep on playing with the mix maybe. Other than the "singing" part i liked it all, and it's not my genre of choice.