Can't help ya with the mix, I don't think you need help listening to this on my speakers.

I love the harmonies on this!!!!

WOW!!!! That's some kick arse guitars going on there! Dang!!!!!!!

Excellent!!!!

Serious Noize!

Ron,
Nice one. It kind of reminds me of something the Tubes might have done.
I enjoyed listening. I have no crits on the mix.

Ron
superb! as everyone has said, for MIDI'd guitars they sound pretty darn good! very well played dude. loving the harmony vocals. the main vox could maybe come down a notch, they are perhaps a little out front. the chorus is cool, like something from War of the Worlds! Drums occasionally have a bit of a metronomic thing to them, are you adjusting velocity (esp on the snare drum?) Excellent though!

Hello Mr. Notnat, I always check out your song posts as I have become a fan of your work. Your soulful tunes and great mixes are always a pleasure to hear. Thanks so much for your compliments on my tune. I kicked up the bass and slightly backed off the lead vox and reposted. Appreciate your time to respond here...............thanks.........Ron 

Cool tune. I think the vox are a little loud and clear. Think they need to come down a bit with some ambience.
Interesting arrangement and production.

Phil, thanks for the positives on this. I wasn't trying for a particular sound or genre, just wanted to keep it simple and heavy. I took your advice and backed the vocals slightly and boosted the bass and guitars, we'll see what happens...............Ron

Ron - very nice.  Scary how good the guitars sound - including the wammy bar effect!  I like the hammond you added halfway through - fits right in.  The vocal harmonies halfway through reminded me of Zappa a little.  Nice vocals.

Like the talking heads if they rocked more!!! love it!!

Hey Mr. Serious, gracias for the "WOW" on this, you are too kind. I cut this entire song on my laptop in a motel room(I'm a traveling salesman-aerial photography). I have a pair of M-audio av40's for monitors on the road and I really like them. As I posted earlier, the "guitars" are Realsrat and Superiff samples played on my keys....just learning how they work...your input is very welcome...............Ron 

Hey Thatsastrat, thanks for the good words. I'll take the "Tubes" comparison, many good ears here have helped much. I think the overall eq still needs a tweak...........Ron