On this occasion we want to talk about a ballad of Joseph Ferrante.
It is called ¨Alone again¨
¨Alone again¨ is a ballad full of floating guitars. A delicate piece.
 
You can listen to it going to:
http://ferrantemusic3.byethost13.com/
 
(You can also download this track, should you want to have it. It is a free download for some time, especially for you)

I would ditch those drums, as they totally do not work with those floating guitars.

And the downward guitar trill on the right gets real repetitive.

Your vocal kinda reminds me of Al Stewart in places.

I like the song but agree with Mr YoYo. 
 
I would re-do the drums, they don't fit well in the song and there are a number of fills that are just out of place.
 
The guitar riff does get very repetitive and I think it un-needed during every vocal break, have the riff happen every third or fourth time and see how that works.   It is a quite enjoyable song and you have done a good job. 
 
Regards

Ahhh, the J Frantahhh bot is back! It's like the Fanta commercial? Don't Cha Don't Cha Wana Feranta?
 
Check it; http://forum.cakewalk.com/showprofile.aspx?memid=73207
 
I'm thinking of starting a relegion based on Joseph? He was the step father, AND the Savior!
 
My favorite is post #2? Where it says JF like a bunch of times in a row? This latest version by the bot is more subtle and refined... But equally as "self edited..." 
 
Our dream in life? At this point, we want to sabotage "JOSEPH FERRANTE" on this occassion... 
 
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In closeing, I would like to say I have never listened to  "JOSEPH FERRANTE" Nor will I listen to  "JOSEPH FERRANTE" and I'm starting a  "JOSEPH FERRANTE" "sucks" fan club? Please PM me if you would like to be a charter member of the  "JOSEPH FERRANTE" "sucks" fan club, we're quite active, we meet weekly, and if you wish to join you must accept the fact that  "JOSEPH FERRANTE" SUCKS! Welcome aboard! We've got jackets...
(I'm sorry for that right there Lord, and please be with the Pygmies in New Guinnie.)
 
DON'T BAN ME! It's a bot/publisist... And it's obnixious. And it was funny (my response)

i dig the overall feel of tune a lot- there is this YES texture about it, which is always a good thing :)

wondering if a more simple drum accoutrement would be warranted here?  at present, they seem to 'fight' with the song's pacing and delivery...