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The drum and rhythm track are nice. Otherwise, we have here a collection of random and annoying sounding noises lasting about five and a half minutes. There is a short bass line that shows some promise. The guitar tone sounds worse than fingernails on a chalkboard and the riffs are out of key a lot. It took a lot of effort to listen to the whole sold. I would suggest that you work out a theme for the song to help make it tell a story of some sort. What is the connection between the moon child and the missing man? Maybe you could musically elaborate on that. Also, work on the guitar technique a bit to make the guitar riffs more pleasant.

In spite of what our resident guru says, this is superbly played and produced.  The sounds are well crafted and unorthodox at times, but certainly not unpleasant (someone's ear buds may be failing).  It reminded me of some experimental guitar work by Adrien Belew, but fresh.  Nice job.

Thanks for listening and the comments

I really dig it. A bit of Jeff Beck here. It did not sound random to me but the changes kept it very interesting. Excellent production and arrangement. Can you check on the timing on some of the guitar solos? It sounded a bit off in some places.