paulo
Production sounds ace . I've listened 5 times now - probably the hookiest tune I've heard from you the thing that struck me is it felt longer than it actually is - can't really say why or if that's good or bad, just seemed longer than the 3:36 for some reason.
Ya know, I kinda felt the same way. Maybe due to repetition, maybe due to a lot of similar elements going on throughout. By the time it gets to the bridge, it does feel longer than 2:00. I do think that since I really only have two and a half short verses that it may not give enough space in between choruses.
philz
Geez, what a blow out job on this, James.... you put this one right out of the park (deep center field at that). I'm floored... it was that kinda' good great! How great was it? About 99.99% great. So what was the missing .01% ?
Think of these ideas as compliments rather than crits because both had to do with me wanting to hear MORE of something. The guitar intro is classicly great, and I would have liked it to be just a tad more 'in your face.' It sets up the whole tune... blast it and let 'em know you're coming. The other thing is that when you're singing the T-e-o-oh part you've got this absolutely infectious little piano riff going on, and I'd love to see you ride that track up a bit more there.
I loved it. This should be on the radio... I do hope you're running with it. Congratz on a spectaular outting with this tune.
So how's the weather back on LawnGuyLand?
I cannot tell you how difficult it was to fit that piano in with all those effected guitar lines going on. I must have tried 50 different patches on it before I ended up going with a pretty basic patch, but mono'd it. I had a reverb bus that I put a lot of the keys through. The piano in the bridge is completely different and in stereo. LI is great: on vacation for 16 days, weather 82, water temp 80, lots of sunshine. Life is good down at the beach. Heading out to the East End and Montauk next week.
BIABDude
+ + + + 1---- did you play the guitar - -- if so how did you record it mic or DI???
Yeah, that was my guitar playing. I DI every guitar and bass track, playing live with POD X3, but recording dry. The six different guitars are either POD Farm or Amplitube Fender modded patches.
I am not a good enough guitar player (to my standards at least) to do much live amp recording...I am just too sloppy.