Music comes from the Heart!!! lol

Aggressive melancholy - I like it!

thanx i hope you will enjoy the second mixdown.i have added some elements and threw in some test vocals.Once again thanx for listening and leaving a comment

Nicely done.  At last I'm beginning to see your vision.  Can't wait for more, you're on the right track.

@ Lynn
thanx for your feedback
it makes me happy to see that you like it.
I will try to post a new version soon.
ONCE AGAIN THANK YOU VERY MUCH LYNN
FOR STOPPIMG BY AND LEAVING A COMMENT. 

MUSIC MAKES THE WORLD GO ROUND!!!
PEACE!!!

this is not my fav genre.... but I can appreciate it... I played around with some of the loops in Sonar a while back..... it was a fun trip. 

However, while I might attempt to play with loops form time to time.... I would not attempt the vocals to something like that.... I would much rather try to dance on national TV... and no way would I do that... My wife laughs when I try to dance..... my kids roll their eyes and say they don't know me..... 

I like the tune..... 

@ GUITARHACKER FIRST OF ALL THANX FOR TAKING THE TIME TO LEAVE A COMMENT. ONLY THE VOCALS ARE NOT MINE BUT THE REST WERE HANDMADE I USUALLY DONT USE SAMPLES BUT IN THIS CASE I HAD TO BECAUSE IT PERFECTLY DESCRIBES ME. I HAVE TONS OF LOOPS BUT I AVOID USING THEM BECAUSE I THINK WHEN I USE LOOPS IN MY PRODUCTION IT WONT BE AN ORIGINAL ANYMORE. BUT THIS LYRICS I HAD TO ;-) MAYBE NEXT TIME I WILL PICK THE MIKE AND KICK SOMETHING TO. ONCE AGAIN THE BEAT IS AN ORIGINAL ONLY THE RAP PART WERE TAKEN FROM ONE OF MY LOOP PACKS. AND GOOD TO HEAR THAT YOU LIKED THE TUNE THANX

This is shaping up nicely. I enjoyed it with vocals but somehow I'd imagined something a little more aggressive. But at least it works great with vocals! Are you going to add your own rhymes to it? An original beat should have original vocals. This can be something awesome! 

@ M i will write a new text, rec it and post it here when i finished it. the track is going to be in German. but once again thanx for your nice Feedback. Peace!!!