Hi Cian , this is mind blowing ! Nice job on the music , vocals and lyrics , the mix could be better but maybe this is what you were looking for .

Nice job on this rap song -James

Lynn, I am familiar with those SD plug ins, its more the layout of the mixer to be honest plus Im not even that sure what kind of sound I am looking for! thanks

Philz, that was exactly the type of song I was after, which is typical of the linkin park composition.

Paulo, notnat and bob, thanks a mil for you time and glad you could appreciate the work gone in.

Night fox, Im sure the mix could be improved easily, but rather than what I was looking for, more a case of what I was capable of!

Thanks all,

Cian

good work.. nice song and groove.. sounds good

Sounds good - I particularly like the transition. It might be the dodgy headphones I'm listening on, but I'd agree about bringing up a bit more of the low mids.
Best wishes, Malcolm

Hi Cian,

I've listened to this a couple of times but haven't had time to comment until now. Anyway, great song, performance and production.

It's no surprise that the vocal (singing sections) is outstanding but the rap sections are also great. Excellent work.

You do know this is Tears for Fears Mad World with a rap overlay? :-) Nothing away, really I still love it.

Nice job Cian, I loved it.  Great rapping skillz

Thanks all.

Makke, delighted to hear it.

Malcolm, the low mids seem to be a constant comment, it certainly would help support the song.

geeare1, also glad you dug the rap a bit too.

band19, yes I know that song and I guess there is a very similar groove/beat. Glad you liked

Mike, and like the rest Im glad you got a kick of of the rapping skillz, I think Im going to turn black just so I can further my skillz in that genre, give me the edge!


Cian

You really do a good rap, Cian.  The closest I can come is "square dance rap" like on Jazz The Funky.  I am not a big rap fan but I do like this song.  It's easy to hear what you are saying.  BTW, NICE songwriting!  I wouldn't expect any less from you.

Awesome comment, Warren.

Thanks everybody, back to some more writing.

Cian