Sorry I'm late to the party, or stoning, can't tell which way it's going at a couple points there on page 1. LOL! :)
This is great! I love the mixing up of lyrics on this. Thanks for taking the time to do this just on my suggestion. I can't believe it!
I really meant it when I said I thought you had a good quality to your voice and the way you did this is perfect.
I don't hear anything I'd change. Mix, vocals, instrumentation are all great.
Thanks!
Bub