First of all this song was NOT written from experience.  That's just not me.  The inspriation for this song was from one of those frantic and hilarious British movies called "Not Now Darling" --  which I saw years ago.  I think the movie is somewhere around circa 1973.  I scribbled down the lyrics a long time ago and just to have some fun and create some silliness I put some music to the lyrics more recently.  It is rockabilly style ---- you know, the sounds which were causin' the cats and chicks to be boppin' down at the union hall.  You might note that the fictitious Freddy Jim has borrowed a few of the chops from Messrs. C. Berry and C. Perkins for the lead breaks in this number. 
I hope that it gives you a bit of a giggle and any feedback would be aprreciated.
Thanks.
 
Two Women
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Freddy J

LOL....I love it! Great lyrics and vox. I like the guitars too. Go Freddy go - go!

Rockin' and Rollickin' Freddy.

Very 50's sounding (should be in mono, IMO). I love it.

Hi, Freddy,
 
Dynamite job on this fun, bouncy, rockabilly gem!
 
Great lyrics, cool guitar playing, and excellent vocals sitting in an authentic, vintage sounding, high quality mix.
 
Super stuff, buddy!
Bob

Well done, Freddy.  It evokes memories from and earlier, innocent time.  The vocal and guitar work are balanced perfectly in the mix, and the drums at the intro caught my attention right away.  You are on a roll.

Freddy you lucky dog you , two women ! You must be thinking of Charlie on Two & a Half Men one of my favorite TV shows I watch everynight on my TV .

Nice job , sounds great to me ! Oh well two women knocking on my door at midnight , sweet dreams James it an't happening ! LOL

James

Thanks Scotty.  I am really glad that you liked it.  "Rock on Chil'ren, I'm with ya."
 
Thank you Bapu.  Thanks for giving it a listen.  I hadn't thought of doing it in mono, but interesting idea... hmmmmmm.
 
Hello Bob.  Thanks for the feedback and kind words buddy.  How is you debut album doing?  Still waiting to get my copy.
 
Thanks for taking time to listen and provide the feedback Lynn.  I had fun being silly and doing this one  --- I guess that helps in doing a wee bit better job.
 
Thanks for listening and commenting James.  Even when I was young and full of adolescent hormones, I could only handle one at a time.  Luckly I have been fortunate enough to have one good women (that would be my wife) and we are heading toward almost 40 years together.
 
Freddy J

Ahhh, two women, 1 is trouble enough... Good job on the bass, and the guitars and drums are "classic Fredaaaaay" At your best. I believe this is your style on display at it's highest level.

+++1

Freddy back to doing what Freddy does best ! Two women ? Imagine that - I could disappoint two people at the same time ! :)