perhaps after listening for a few times now it embedded in my brain as it was in my last dream early A.M. today and I woke up with it in my head!! great hook. :) 

Well done Lynn. Great stuff.

Thanks again, Daren, I really appreciate your kind words.

Same goes for you, Tim.  You have offered me much help on a number of songs, so I always appreciate your time and effort.

great but the short synth riffs are not correct for my taste. like i said all in all very good Track !!! Especially the outro (ORIGINAL) :-) BEST REGARDS

I had to listen to both again.

Much better. I love how the snare feels like it late even though it's not. I'm not sure if I like how the vocals goes from wet to dry and back again but that's subjective.

Even better! Well done!!!

Very entertaining Lynn, I really enjoyed that one.

Lynn, Very nice remake on #2. The intro fits nice, vocals are up and the ending was a suprise. Very nicely done. Great song!! Peace be with you. Blessings, John

Thanks to all of you for stopping by to listen.

Boomin36Beatz, thanks for your comments.  These short synth riffs are the best I can think of at the moment.  However, I will think about them in more detail, now.  Thanks for contributing.

Guitarpima,  I appreciate you taking the time to relisten.  You're the only one who commented on the vocal going from wet to dry to wet again.  Good ears.  That, BTW, is an old production trick from the late 60's, afaik.  I'm happy you like the new version.

Clean, thank you for your comment.

Guitarplayer, thank you for listening.  I have only my fellow forum members to thank for the revised intro and outro.

Sounds great and nicely produced.  You do have a great voice.  The song repeats part A five times and part B three times.  It is a bit repetitive.

Vicente,  thanks for stopping in here and taking the time to listen and reply.  I know what you mean by being a bit repetitive, I guess I had too many lyrics.

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Sounds great and nicely produced.  You do have a great voice.  The song repeats part A five times and part B three times.  It is a bit repetitive.