Thanks all, Scotty, MGH, Tim, James, Bapu, Pistolpete, Mike (Makeshift), Twisted, Munmum, Mike_mccue, Lynn, The Band.
I understand this is not everyone's cuppa! Target audiences are specifically urban tweens, skaters, and/or persecuted Christians.
Regarding the need for a "singer" (Tim) ... I seriously invite you (Tim) to lead the verses! Else ... someone may want to elaborate/clarify ... as my verse vocs seem pretty 'soulful', 'true', and excellent to my ears, IMHO ... and, all singers here are veteran singers. Joy has sung about 30 songs and sings regularly at church ... few child-singers I've tested can approximate her.
And, who could sing this chorus better than Reece? Tim? Julianna? Twisted? Yoyo? Danny? Respectfully, Reece's child-like innocence, compassion, and aspiring professionalism seemed absolutely perfect here. (Any thoughts anyone?)
... to 'swing' (serve) with the rhythm-dominance (bass drums and bass guitar) ... and 'meekly' draw attention to peculiar soul-troubles going on in the psalmist (Ps 35).
Albeit, I agree the middle cries could have used an Alice-Cooper ...
Again ... the Ps 35 verse-vocs were to draw attention if the listener himself or herself were the persecuted-paranoid Christian sort ... as King David seemed ... when he fled from his enemies (Saul, King Achish, Absolom, etc.).
I think Danny may have chosen to widen things a bit (post-production) ... for hip-hop-pop's sake and/or the skate floor. I haven't tested this at the skating rink yet.
Anyway, utmost thanks and blessings all!