I love the percussion but I found the orchestra could have done with a bit more variation earlier on to keep me focussed on the track but when it builds up more towards the end it really sounds epic.
Which package did you use for the percussion? It's not all from EW orchestra is it?
The production sounded fantastic on my laptop speakers - everything was clear and nothing sounded muffled.
What's the purpose of the track? Is it for a soundtrack, a showreel, an album track? From a personal point of view I would have preferred more in the way of melody...
Cheers,
Terry.