I've been trying to make a smooth Full length track. what does it sound like to you??? any constructive critics???

 


 thanxxx

 I'll give you my take on this. I would shorten it up a little bit.For a track like this 3 minutes or less is usually good. I would pick up the tempo slightly. I would add some variation to the drums to make it seem more like a human drummer. I would add an instrumental break into the middle of the song. Lastly I would make the synth parts more interesting. JMHO.

Boomin36Beatz, it's good to see you back in these parts again.  I have to agree with Starise in that it's rather long and repetitive.  Perhaps if it had a killer vocal or instrument break it would be a real attention grabber.  It has the potential to be good backing tracks, but a chorus, bridge, or some kind of hook would help this tremendously.  Let this be a starting point for something better.

First of all thanx for your constructive critics. @ Starise originally the track was 3:37 but then i decided to make it longer. when it comes to the drums they are not perfect. thats right. i will add some variations. @ Lynn i am sorry for not replying to my last post here i was on vacation. your critics are always welcome. i have learnt much and i am proud to know such a great musician (and thats you) :-) powerfull voice like yours would fit great maybe. i don't know i dont have such a powefull voice for my beats or parts(call it what you want) once again thank you very much.